satya - Saturday, February 09, 2008 2:19:50 PM

Written by Samudrala Sr.

satya - Monday, February 11, 2008 9:38:43 AM

An attempt at translation

Him:
Sweet is this lovely summer night.
Her:
Unforgettable is this well-being, this felicity, this contentment, this joy.

Him:
Playful of my heart is the delightful Moon, My Lure.
Her:
In sight of your striking presence, 
Full of glee is the Night's Queen.

Him:
Look! Flowery Maindens, their half-bloom eyes
imperceptiable in smiles.
Her:
Perhaps, in witness of our affection
their smiles breaking out in sprinkles.

Her:
When you gave me "You" as a gift
Sacred turned my being.
Him:
This sprawling garden, in your alliance,
Come to taste the zest for living.

satya - Wednesday, February 13, 2008 8:43:51 AM

try this again

Him:
So sweet, this summer night!
Her:
To remember is this joy,
that to my life's refrain I consign.

Him:
To you, my alure, I say:
Playful of my heart is the delightful Moon.
Her:
In sight of your handsome form, 
Gleeful is the Night's Queen.

Him:
Flowery Maidens: their half-bloom eyes
imperceptiable in smiles.
Her:
Perhaps, in witness of our affection,
in sprinkles broke their laughs. 

Her:
When you gave me "You" as a gift
Sacred turned my self.
Him:
This sprawling garden, in your alliance,
Come to taste the luscious zest of living.

satya - Friday, February 15, 2008 8:24:12 AM

another try

Him:
So sweet, this summer night!
Her:
To remember is this joy,
that to my life's refrain I consign.

Him:
To you, my alure, I say:
Playful of swells of my heart is the delighted Moon.
Her:
In sight of your handsome form, 
Gleeful is the Night's Queen.

Him:
Flowery Maidens: their half-bloom eyes
imperceptiable in smiles.
Her:
In witness of our affection, Perhaps,
in sprinkles broke their laughs. 

Her:
When you gave me "You" as a gift
Sacred turned my self.
Him:
This sprawling garden, in your alliance,
The zest of living it has come to taste.